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So I have another sonic OC who has not been released as of yet but I have drawn her. Her name is Sheila and she is a kickboxing, red kangaroo just to sum it up quickly. Anyway, I decided to take a mary sue test for her because I could. I do not own the test who I copied off this person -> lavagirl122 who got it from somewhere.

Because the test is so long, I will copy and paste the questions I marked and the total score. After I do that I will paste the whole test bellow.



(x) Does the character have the name of an already canon character? [+3]

I had to look this one up as I did not know. It does turn out there is a cannon character called Sheila but she only appeared in one episode of sonic underground.

(x) Does the character dress in a manner you find particularly attractive, sexy, or cool? [+2]

(x) Is the character have a physical flaw that doesn't distract from there physical beauty?(ex. White streak in hair, scar, unusual birthmark or tattoo etc.) [+2] 

(x) Can the Character Run faster than 175 miles per hour? [+3]

I am going to count this as a mark as she doesn't run 175 miles per hour but can hop at that speed.

(x)Super Speed [+1]

(x)The ability to shrug off minor wounds [+1]

(x)Super strength [+1]

(x) Skill in martial arts or hand-to-hand combat [+1]

(x) Did you select more than 3 of the above? [+2]

(x) Does the character ever run away from home [+1]

Once when she was younger.

(x) Was the character ever forced into wrong doing? [+3]

(x) Was the character ever assaulted? [+2]

(x)Has the character traveled extensively? [+1]

(x) Has the character beaten a strong canon character in battle? (ex. Blaze, Silver, Sonic, Knuckles, Shadow, Mephiles, Scourge etc.) [+3]

Yes she has battled Knuckles and won due to a misunderstanding on Angel Island

(x) Are any of the canon characters a rival of your character [+1]

Yes, Knuckles.

(x) Is your character a species already used in the sonic universe? [+1]

LOL like 2 other characters are kangaroos

(x) Do you and your character dress alike? [+1]

(x) Does the character have a significant personality flaw? (ex. she/he is a spoiled brat, is horribly biased, only cares for sex, is irrationally violent, etc.) [-1]

Too
 headstrong

(x) That persist till death or end of the story? [-1]

(x)Does this flaw get the character in serious trouble? [-1]

(x) Does the character not learn from major mistakes? [-1]



21-35 points: Borderline-Sue. Your character is cutting it close, and you may want to work on the details a bit, but you're well on your way to having a lovely original character. Good work. 













Section 1:
What is in an name?

( ) Is your character named after you in any way? (This includes your first/middle/last name, nicknames, screen-names, or online names you use) [+5]
( ) Is the character's name have nothing to do with his/her appearence, personality, abilities or looks? (All sonic characters name has something to do with that) [+2]
( ) Is the character's name contain unnecessary hyphens, apostrophes, or other punctuation? [+1]
( ) Is the character's name a real word deliberately spelled wrong [+1]
( ) Does the character have more than one first, middle, or last name, without reason? [+3]
( ) Does the character have a name you really, really like? [+1]
(x) Does the character have the name of an already canon character? [+3]

I had to look this one up as I did not know. It does turn out there is a cannon character called Sheila but she only appeared in one episode of sonic underground.
( ) Does the character have a forigen name even though the character is not [+2]
( ) Is it Asian [+2]
( ) Is the character named after a character from another show/book you like? [+1]
( )Does the character have a name or nickname that corresponds to a mythological/literary/historical/etc. figure (e.g. Venus, Faustus, Bonaparte)? [+1]
( )Does the character have a nickname or pseudonym? [+1]
( ) Is it a "dangerous" nickname (e.g. Death Dealer, Crimson Fury, etc.)? [+2]
( ) Is the character a female with a male sounding name or vise-versa? [+1]

Section 2:
In the Eye of the Beholder!

( ) Is the character beautiful, gourgous, stunning, cute, handsome etc.? [+1] (only cute... not much XD)
( ) Is the character astonishgly, amazingly, beyond- beautiful, gourgous, stunning, cute, handsome etc. or something like that? [+5]
( ) Is the character described this way by another character? [+2]
( ) By more than one character? [+3]
( ) Is more than 1 canon character attracted to them? [+2]
( )Is an otherwise chaste, aloof or stoic character immediately attracted to her/him? [+2]
( ) Is it Shadow?[+3]
( ) Do any characters feel "threatened" and/or "Jealous" of there beauty? [+1]
( ) Is it Amy? [+3]
( ) Does the character have eyes that somehow reflect hidden depths or experience or sorrow? [+1]
( ) Does the character get a disproportionate amount of physical description compared to the rest of the characters? [+1]
(x) Does the character dress in a manner you find particularly attractive, sexy, or cool? [+2]
( ) Is the character ever described as "thin enough to be anorexic," where this is intended as a compliment? [+2]
(x) Is the character have a physical flaw that doesn't ditract from there physical beauty?(ex. White streak in hair, scar, unusual birthmark or tatto etc.) [+2]
( ) Is the character over 25 and appear much younger than he/she really is? [+2]
( ) Is the character under 18 and appear older than he/she really is? [+2]
( ) Does your female character have bigger breast than rouge? [+1]
( ) Is the character made by recoloring/tracing/editing official sonic characters? [+2]

Section 3:
A need for Speed!

(x) Can the Character Run faster than 175 miles per hour? [+3]

I am going to count this as a mark as she doesn't run 175 miles per hour but can hop at that speed.
( ) Faster than 300 miles per hour [+5]
( ) Can the Character Run as fast as Sonic and Shadow? [+10]
( )Under water to? [+10]
( ) Can your character run Faster than Sonic and Shadow? [+9000]( No, I am not Kidding)
( )Underwater to? [+10]
( ) Can your character very close to Sonic and Shadow's speed?(that’s 400-700) [+5]

Section 4:
The power within!

Does the character Posses any of the following abilites/powers?
( )Teleportation [+1]
( )Telepathy [+1]
( )Telekinesis [+2]
( )Pyrokinesis [+2]
( )Prophecy [+1]
( )Healing [+1]
( )Empathy [+1]
( )Shapeshifting [+1]
(x)Super Speed [+1]
( )Invisibility [+1]
( )Invulnerability [+1]
( )Immortality [+2]
( ) Is the character is depressed/angry about being Immortal? [+2]
( )The ability to pass through matter [+1]
( )General magic or sorcery [+1]
( )Time/Demention travel [+2]
( )The ability to go super/hyper [+3]
( )Without the aid of the ALL chaos emeralds [+5]
( )Transdimensional travel or communication [+2]
( )Photographic memory [+1]
( )The ability to see auras [+1]
( )Summoning [+2]
( )Power of seduction [+1]
(x)The ability to shrug off minor wounds [+1]
( )The ability to kill people with her/his bare hands [+1]
(x)Super strength [+1]

(x) Skill in martial arts or hand-to-hand combat [+1]
( )Sharp-shooting [+1]
( )Sleight of hand [+1]
( )Computer hacking[+1]
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(x) Did you select more than 3 of the above? [+2]
( ) Does your character posses other power things besides the Chaos emeralds? [+3]
( ) Does your character ever posses or carry around a Chaos Emerald? [+3]
( ) Can your character perform Chaos Control and/or Chaos Blast? [+2]
( ) Does the character have a demon/angel or something like a demon/angel? [+2]
( ) Your character literately IS a demon/angel or part demon/angel? [+3]
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( ) Is your character above average intelligence [+1]
( ) Are they a genius? [+2]
( ) Is your Character as smart as Eggman / Tails? [+3]
( ) Smarter than Eggman/ Tails? [+4]


Section 5:
The Characters Life.

( ) Does the character have a clone or identical twin? [+1]
( ) Is the character related to royalty or nobility? [+1]
( ) And they do not know they are? [+2]
( ) Is the character rich or well-to-do, although she/he doesn't work? [+5]
( ) Is the character heir to a large fortune? [+2]
( ) The sole heir? [+3]
( ) Was characters town/colony/city/world/planet destroyed? [+3]
( ) By Iblis/Eggman/Shadow/Mephiles or any other canon characters/villians? [+4]
( ) Is the character the last surviving member of a family/clan/race/species/etc.? [+3]
( ) Was the character ever the sole survivor of a calamity? [+2]
( ) Is the character an orphan? [+1]
( ) Is the characters Parents dead? [+1]
( ) Were they killed [+1]
( ) Were they turned into robots? [+1]
( ) Did they kill their parents? [+2]
( ) Was the character ever abandoned by his/her parents/guardians? [+1]
( ) Was the character ever emotinaly/mentaly abused? [+2]
( ) Was the character ever physicaly abused? [+3]
( ) Was the character ever sexually abused? [+4]
( ) Was it incest? [+5]
( ) Has the Character ever suffer child Neglect?[+1]
( ) Has the Character ever been completely ignored by their parents/guardians [+1]
( ) Is the character adopted? [+1]
( ) Were they adopted by a bad family? [+3]
( ) Has the character ever been a slave? (or a slave in all but name) [+2]
(x) Does the character ever run away from home [+1]

Once when she was younger.
( ) Was the character an illegitimate birth? [+1]
( ) Does the character have amnesia [+1]
( ) Does the character have some trinket of there past [+1]
( ) Were they kicked out of there homeland or attacked by the people of there homeland? [+1]
( ) Because of crime they did not commit? [+2]
( ) Because of being to perfect or beautiful? [+2]
( ) Because of being to powerful? [+2]
( ) Because of jealousy? [+2]
( ) Was the character tortured in any way? [+2]
(x) Was the character ever forced into wrong doing? [+3]
( ) Were they raped/almost raped/molested? [+2]
( ) Was it incest? [+4]
( ) By another family member? ( Step-parent, Step-Sibling etc.) [+3]
( ) By more than one individual? [+3]
( ) Was it by someone of the same gender? [+4]
( ) Was the character ever abducted/kidnapped? [+3]
(x) Was the character ever assaulted? [+2]
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( ) Was any of the above done by a canon character? [First +2] [Now go back and add 1 more for each]
( ) Was any of the above more than once? [add 1 more for each]
( ) Does your character angst in the present? [+1]

Section 6:
More on the Character and Personality.

( ) Is the character unusually accomplished for her/his age/species/etc.? [+1]
( ) Is the character unusually skilled in something that is not their profession? (ex. Sword fighting/ cooking etc.) [+1]
(x)Has the character travelled extensively? [+1]

Marking it as she travels around Downunda a lot and knows a lot about it.
( )Does the character collect things you consider intellectual or cultured? [+1]
( )Is the character fluent in more than two languages? [+1]
( ) More than three? [+3]
( ) Is the character consistently irreverent, radical, or disobey superiors without repercussions/punishments? [+3]
( ) Does the character ever easily learn a difficult skill (ex. learn to play guitar in a matter of weeks)? [+3]
( ) Does the character have an amazing singing voice? [+3]
( ) Does the character rarely do anything wrong or rude? [+2]
( ) Does the character never loose a match? [+3]
( ) Does the character play a musical instrument well? [+1]
( ) More than one? [+2]
( ) Does the character use a katana or any other Asian weapon? [+1]
( ) Despite being of non-Asian heritage?[+2]
( ) Does the character "just know things"? [+3]

Section 7:
Relationships with Canon Characters

( ) Is the character "best friends" with a canon character or group of canon characters? [+2]
( ) Do any of the canon characters save the characters life? [+2]
( ) Does your character save any of the canon character's lives? [+3]
( ) Do any canon characters look up to the character? [+1]
( ) Is it Tails or Cream? [+1]
(x) Has the character beaten a strong canon character in battle? (ex. Blaze, Silver, Sonic, Knuckles, Shadow, Mephiles, Scourge etc.) [+3]

Yes she has battled Knuckles and won due to a misunderstanding on Angel Island
( ) Are any characters Jealous of the characters abilities/attention/love life etc.? [+1]
(x) Are any of the canon characters a rival of your character [+1]

Yes, Knuckles.
( ) Do any Canon characters love/like/have a crush on/attracted to your character? [+1]
( ) Is it an aloof character(ex. shadow) [+2]
( ) Is it a character that is involved with someone else? (ex. Blaze & Silver) [+2]
( ) Is it a character who is clearly interested in someone else? (ex. Amy) [+2]
( ) Is it Sonic? [+1]
( ) Is your character Dating a Canon Character? [+2]
( ) Is it an aloof character(ex. shadow) [+3]
( ) Is it a character that is involved with someone else? (ex. Blaze & Silver) [+3]
( ) Is it a character who is clearly interested in someone else? (ex. Amy) [+3]
( ) Is it Sonic? [+2]
( ) Does more than one Canon Character love/like/have a crush on/attracted to your character? [+3]
( ) More than two? [+4]
( ) More than three? [+5]
( ) More than four? [+6]
( ) More than five? [+7]
( ) Is your character love/like/have a crush on/attracted to more than one Canon Character?[+2]
( ) More than two? [+3]
( ) More than three? [+4]
( ) More than four? [+5]
( ) More than five? [+6]
( ) Does the character ever willingly have sex with any of the canon characters? [+10]
( ) More than two? [+20]
( ) Does every canon character like/respect your character? [+5]
( ) Even the villains? [+10]
( ) Do the characters who dislike like your character still have some type of respect for them? [+3]
( ) Does the presence of your character make any canon character act like a raving bitch/bastard? [+2]
( ) You considered them a raving bitch/bastard before hand? [+3]
( ) In any other way does your character make any of the canon characters go Out Of Character? [+4]
( ) Is your character related to any of the canon characters? [+2]
( ) Is it sonic or shadow? [+3]
( ) Is it Amy? [+2]
( ) Is it Knuckles? [+2]
( ) Are they siblings? [+2]
( ) Is the character their son/daughter? [+2]

Section 8:
Species.

(x) Is your character a species already used in the sonic universe? [+1]
( ) Is it a Hedgehog(Seriously do you know how unoriginal that is?) [+2] 
( ) Is it a fox [+1]
( ) Is it an Echidna (Knuckles is supposed to be the LAST of his species) [+3] 
( ) Is your character a hybrid? [+2]
( ) of more than 2 species? [+3]
( ) Are they vampire or part vampire? [+2]
( ) Are they elf or part elf? [+1]
( ) Are they shinigami or part shinigami?[+2] (WTF?)
( ) Are they alien or part alien? [+1]

Section 9:
Even in Death.

( ) Does the character die tragically? [+1]
( ) Were they killed [+2]
( ) By a canon character? [+3]
( ) Did they ever appear to die but not really die [+2]
( ) Did they ever die but was restored [+2]
( ) By a canon character [+3]
( ) Were The characters very depressed about their death? [+2]
( ) Did the character sacrifice themselves? [+2]
( ) Did they make a heart wrenching speech before they died? [+1]

Section 10:
Your Character and You.

( ) Does your character have your looks? [+1]
( ) Is your character look how you wish you looked? [+2]
(x) Do you and your character dress alike? [+1]
( ) Is your character a mouthpiece for your views? [+1]
( ) Do you wish you could you be like your character? [+1]
( ) Do you ever pretend you are the character? [+2]
( ) Do you take criticism of your character as personal attack? [+1]
( ) Does your character hold your Job or a job you wish you had? (ex Ninja, doctor, pirate, lawer etc.) [+1]


Time to Redeem your self!
( ) Is the character is overweight for the full duration of the story? ("Buxom and/or Curvy" does not count.) [-5]
( ) Does your character have a physical/mental handicap that hinders them significantly? (ex. autism, crippled limbs) [-3]
( ) Does your character have a physical flaw that does detract from there beauty? (ex. muscles to large, giant nose, scar on face etc.) [-2]
( ) Do they have a very bad habit? (ex. Drinking, smoking, killing, dangerous sexual fetish etc.) [-2]
(x) Does the character have a significant personality flaw? (ex. she/he is a spoiled brat, is horribly biased, only cares for sex, is irrationally violent, etc.) [-1]
(x) That persist till death or end of the story? [-1]
(x)Does this flaw get the character in serious trouble? [-1]
( ) Is the character all around evil with no good at all? [-2]
( ) Does the character have very little or no empathy for other people? [-1]
( ) Is the character selfishly manipulative or sadistic? (e.g. threatens self-harm, lies, blackmails, in order to get her/his wayetc.) [-1]
(x) Does the character not learn from major mistakes? [-1]




Scoring
Any negative number: I seriously recommend giving your character some good traits
0-10 points: The Anti-Sue. Your character is the very antithesis of a Mary-Sue. Why are you even taking this test?
11-20 points: The Non-Sue. Your character is a well-developed, balanced person, and is almost certainly not a Mary Sue. Congratulations! 
21-35 points: Borderline-Sue. Your character is cutting it close, and you may want to work on the details a bit, but you're well on your way to having a lovely original character. Good work. 
36-55 points: Mary-Sue. Your character needs some work in order to be believable. But despair not; you should still be able to salvage her with a little effort. Don't give up.
56-70 points: Über-Sue. You've got one hell of a Mary-Sue on your hands here, and it's not going to be easy to set things right. But do your best. There may be hope for you yet. 
71 points or more: Irredeemable-Sue. You're going to have to start over, my friend. I know you want to keep your character, but no. Just no.

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Thanks for the fav kaomoji set 2 61/67 
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welcome >^_^<
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WOW! Thank you for all the favorites!
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you are welcome. I fave a lot here and there because your water colours are so good~
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Thank you! But not water colors, it's all cut paper.
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oh sorry i mistook you for another artist. Eather way your work is amazing! I particularly love your beauty and the beast ones~!
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Thanks you for the fav ;D
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you are welcome
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Thanks for faving my OC; much appreciated by this Llama :3
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